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Pulitzer Prize winning novelist Philip Roth's latest, The Plot Against America, made its debut on best seller lists this week. This e-mail, found on a usenet group, provides an insight into the process to which even a great author like Mr. Roth must submit.  
--RJ 
 >From: 
          Carson Holmes 
          >Date: Mon Sept 15, 2003 9:52:35 AM US/Eastern  
          >To: Philip Roth 
          >Subject: Greetings and thanks
         
  
          >Dear Philip,  
          > 
          >Received your manuscript on March 8. It arrived  
          >safe and sound (ha-ha). Very interesting work, to  
          >be sure. I think you've made a very bold choice by  
          >taking a foray into the genre of alternate  
          >history fiction. It's usually been the province  
          >of science fiction authors and I'm sure  
          >you'll surprise and delight many of your fans  
          >with this one. Though this is just an early draft,  
          >I think we have the makings of another Pulitzer here, 
          >or at the very, very least, a Faulkner.  
          >  
          >That being said, however, here are a few notes,  
          >just some things I noticed on my first pass through 
          >that perhaps we could discuss when we meet next month: 
          >  
          >pg. 4-- Strong start, but having every character introduced 
           
          >say "Say, now, what if -this- had happened, hmmmm?"  
          >or some variation sort of telegraphs the idea of the whole venture. 
           
          >  
          >pg. 22-- Wondering if it might not be a bit much to have  
          >Hitler as the godfather of Lindbergh's son, then enacting  
          >the Holocaust out of anger over the child's kidnapping and 
          >murder? Perhaps something less obvious, here.  
          >  
          >pg. 50-- "And so, President Roosevelt shrank out of the 
          public 
          >eye, quietly retiring to the family tobacco farm in North Carolina 
           
          >to work the land." Another crop, maybe? Cotton? Sugar beets?  
          >  
          >pg .87-- Dinosaurs?  
          >  
          >pg. 106-- Odd tangent here. The modern-day southerners thrown 
          >into the Hundred Years' War? Yes, it's good for a bit of a  
          >laugh, but a whole chapter? Maybe this could be cut down  
          >into a dream sequence.  
          >  
          >pg. 138-- More dinosaurs?  
          >  
          >pg. 149-- I understand we're dealing with some rather speculative 
           
          >concepts here, but I doubt that, if things had gone differently,  
          >we would have seen a three-term presidency by "The actor who played 
           
          >'The Fonz' on that 'Happy Days' program." (I believe his name is  
          >Henry Winkler, by the way.)  
          >  
          >pg. 226-- The dinosaurs... alright, I understand, now. Great 
          way  
          >of pulling that together. Very rewarding. 
          
          
  
          >Again, great, wonderful  
          >ideas here, overall, but we'll talk the week of the sixth. Call  
          >Helen to schedule a time that works for you.  
          >  
          >Yours, in earnest,  
          >Carlson  
          >  
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          >Carlson N. Holmes  
          >Editor, Houghton-Mifflin Co.  
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